Aí vão algumas sugestões de revisão.

Sempre fui contra a dupla ênfase com parêntesis e aspas ("desse modo"), então as retirei.

Abraços,
Thiago Pezzo (Tico)

December 4, 2022 11:34 AM, "Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana" <phls@debian.org> wrote:

Olá,

Segue em anexo o arquivo para revisão.
É uma tradução nova.

Abraços,

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Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana (phls)
Belo Horizonte - Brasil
Debian Developer
Site: http://phls.com.br
GPG ID: 0443C450

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